This is Peter. I liked your design of type face especially one of the 4th from the bottom. It looks like ribon to me which it is appearing. It's a good start.
Your type treatments are working really well - the big one on the bottom communicates classiness but still has this almost playful feel. The pyramid idea is really cool too, if you could find a clever way to take off the top to pour out the ingredients i think that would look incredible on the shelf
Dude awesome sketches! I really enjoy seeing how thorough you have been in formulating and conveying your ideas. I definitely think your on the right track with the bag dispenser. Would it be for single use, or multiple servings? I also like what your doing with the type, fun ideas and great line work. I think your biggest challenge is going to be to find that line between appealing towards American aesthetics and branding conventions while still maintaining that authentic mexican feel.
I like the squeeze idea i think its efficient for someone that cooks. As far as the logos i like the strong sharp edges on some of the type but i also like hoe the whole logo flows and curves.
This is Peter. I liked your design of type face especially one of the 4th from the bottom. It looks like ribon to me which it is appearing. It's a good start.
ReplyDeleteYour type treatments are working really well - the big one on the bottom communicates classiness but still has this almost playful feel. The pyramid idea is really cool too, if you could find a clever way to take off the top to pour out the ingredients i think that would look incredible on the shelf
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Dude awesome sketches! I really enjoy seeing how thorough you have been in formulating and conveying your ideas. I definitely think your on the right track with the bag dispenser. Would it be for single use, or multiple servings? I also like what your doing with the type, fun ideas and great line work. I think your biggest challenge is going to be to find that line between appealing towards American aesthetics and branding conventions while still maintaining that authentic mexican feel.
ReplyDeleteThanks! the original product is only for single use, that is why the idea to create a mostly paper package so it can be recycled easier.
ReplyDeleteI like the squeeze idea i think its efficient for someone that cooks. As far as the logos i like the strong sharp edges on some of the type but i also like hoe the whole logo flows and curves.
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